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Love it…. some things Aren’t Capitalised…. but it gets the point across… I love the intense anger and the poetic kind of rythm to it!!! Very good!!!

Wonderful! I don’t know if it’s intentional or not, but the line “i’ll live it how I want to.” not being capitalized actually seems to highlight it. Not breaking the rules, but making your own. Does that make sense? I hope so.

thanks. actually it was intentional. it just didnt look right when i capitalized it. but i like your reasoning better. lol

Percfect (:

thanks todd. im actually a bit suprised. ok im completly shocked. lol thanks though

I love the lower case ‘i’ in that particular line… it gets the piont across that you arent just break rules but that your rewriting them…it makes sense and really makes that line stand out.

thanks. thats actually not what i was going for but i like the way you interpret it. lol

your welcome. it’s no big.