I see the reference there, Mrs. Winehouse. Nice name to use. I wonder what her problem is but this definitly adds to the conflict.
LoA

shes an alchie.. your like the best writer on ficlets Kermitgorf. evil Wizard lol.

First thing denial about your problem. She not ready to change as all.

Very well written. What is happening to her? Alcoholism? Stress? Neurological problems? I’m intrigued.

HMM MIGHT HAVE TO CHECK HER HEAD BEFORE SOME THING GOES SERIOUSLY WRONG .