holy cow, what did she do?? how is it her fault? What a killer of an ending it leaves you guessing. Sequel you must!

Oh there will be sequels :) I need to ask though, am I not being clear on who’s POV this part of the story is? I don’t want there to be confusion, because currently, it’s CherryPop’s father, Desmond – who’s a he – telling the tale. Just wondering if I need to go back and make that clearer…

POV is fine, Melia. It’s just that the reader needs to go back a few parts to where it’s established if they’re just picking up the story from here. If you keep re-establishing the POV in every part, it’ll slow down the story.