Not sure what to make of it. It’s a definite slice of a story that could be all sorts of things. I think what sets it apart is your casual pace, not trying to cram information in but just letting the story go at the pace it would if it part of a much larger whole, which is cool.
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Hey thanks, Doc – this is part of another story – Susan and Kate are ex-lovers and Susan goes postal later and hijacks a plane so she and Kate can fly to Belgium to get married. Problem is – Kate doesn’t want anything to do with her… I may post the rest later, but with all the younger writers on this site it may not be appropriate.