AMAZING ! I loved the perspective. Written in such a poetic, captivating way. Slightly reminscent of Death’s perspective in The Book Thief by Markus Zusak, but still entirely your own. I loved it, if you couldn’t tell. I’d give it 11 stars if possible.
LoA

Woah…I totally agree with Storykeeper! This is written in such an amazing way that I can’t describe. Besides the fact that when you described, it was great. Awesome job.
LoA