this story is great. I can see it infold before my eyes.. Token of a well written story. Humerous ending. It reminds me of my friend doing Tae Kwan Do. Only instead of bricks he used pieces of wood. Ive seen a video of his where he perfoms. Its incredible.

I was constantly thinking what is going to happen? But the ending is hilarious it’s totally different than what you expect! The story is perfectly balanced and every word you write is focused on the ending. That is truly amazing.