haha i love how this is written..great job!

Well, let’s hope it is a long ride…
hmm, an email, that’s it. Very open-ended I must say.
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okay, i sequelled your nice little story

an excellent start to what’s about to be a long series.

This is good, but I don’t want to intrude because I don’t knoe ehat you two are thinking. Great job.
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I meant know & what ha.
I like how you opened up to this series in a way that makes people want to keep reading. Love it.
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you sure know how to hook people into reading this ficlet.. it’s like an intro to a upcoming moving attraction..

ooo good job!