ok this i’d like to read.. crawl up inside his head… love the italics so you dont have to keep writing he said, she said.. and she’s nameless anyway..
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Intriguing! The last paragraph was my favorite part. Very well written, and the narrative has a nice flow to it.
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Interesting turn!

Cool! Seems like an awesome project they have here!
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I love it!