How funny! I would imagine that is the reason we have never had “contact” with the others; we’re crazy down here. ;)

Okay, the ending is funny an unexpected, what is very nice, but in my opinion the beginning doesn’t work that well.
all bones and no flesh, a description of what the environment looks like would be nice.
Further than that its well written.
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I don’t get you Vampierella… That was a great description of the alien. Why did you say all bones no flesh. When I read the beginning I was like why mushrooms, but then at the end you talked about planets and I got it. I thought it was very well writtten.
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I liked the descriptions of the aliens,, rather creepy things they are.
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Personally, I prefer it to be “all bones and no flesh” in the beginning. It sets up the surprise ending better that way.
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really awesome alien point of view!