Sketchy. And good. I like the lack of details. In a weird way.

Great story! Reminds me of Memento in a way, about a character who can’t remember a thing but is out for revenge come hell or high water. Nicely written. Actually I haven’t written you many comments but I’m enjoying all of your stories on here; you’re quite the prolific ficleteer, and a quality one at that. :-)
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Very good opening. Enough to get you interested, but still leaving a mystery.

I love it. Immediately grabs you by the throat and makes you wonder what happened

Reads like the synopsis for a thrilling movie. I’m hooked! (Although this ficlet does nothing to help bolster the reputation of those poor transvestites. :D)
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