This story is SOOOSOSSSSSSSSSSSOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO awesome! the feeling is perfect!
I know I keep saying this, but your descriptions are unbelievable.!

hehe the evil baby from hell.

Gimme my rattle or I’ll sic ya.

:)

S.J.

this is interesting, and though it was so short, i think that is a good way to leave it. but i think i would dare, to look into the eyes of the soulless and evil. a lot you could learn.
oooooo i like this!!!