Interesting. This could be really good.

Ooh, I like it…the epiphany at the end of hedonism. And that’s an awfully big maybe at the end.
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Very well written. And I love how the conversation appears to be taking place via text message or IM or some such technological thing. This shows you how disconnected we’ve become, and maybe helps answer why society has become even more hedonistic. We don’t connect on deep, intellectual levels like we used to.
OK, I’ll stop blathering on. :D
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