This is pretty good for a seventh grader. I like the rhyming of mist and missed.. That was cute. Keep it up!!

PRETTY DEEP . THE RHYMING IS GOOD . I LIKE IT . THE PICTURE MAKES IT BETTER TOO .

Very pretty poem, thank you.

S.J.

Love it. Your writing style has a strong similarity to that of Kevin Henkes. Ever read “Olive’s Ocean?” You should.