You need to check your grammar and spelling; there are a number of homonym errors and grammar.
On the story side, it’s hard to tell exactly what is going on, or why the hail is happening apart from something about a chemical plant—nor is there any indication why it’s called “Hello Disease Control” since Disease Control never appears in it as far as I can tell.
I’m not sure why this is at the top of the Most Active list for today, but I’m sure there must be a reason…
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