Not bad writing, but you need to put a space after each period and break it up into paragraphs. One big blob of text isn’t easy to read.

srry.ill try 2 do that,but not likely.just my style.

No doubt you have a unique style, and I respect your desire to keep it that way, but consider taking Robotech_Master’s advice and breaking this up into smaller paragraphs. Also, try turning on spell-check when you write so you can eliminate any misspellings. Just right-click on your mouse to do that.
When people see what’s called a “wall of text,” many won’t even take the time to read it, which would be a shame in this case because there’s an interesting story hidden here.
I hope you’ll rethink this.
LoA

k.i will