Comments on A scream in the rain by Sailor Emo

Sailor Emo

I would like to thank my maillady for driving through the rain and her flashing lights that look like the flashing of a gun being fired.Oh, and God for making the rain.
- Posted 2009-01-12 02:31:33.
Sailor Emo

(That’s what inspired my story)
- Posted 2009-01-12 02:31:33.
xbluxmoonx

nice cliffie. i liked this story. nice job! ^_
- Posted 2009-01-12 02:31:33.
Uncle Sam

Awesome. Rain here too. Added on.
- Posted 2009-01-12 02:31:33.
SJHundak/S.J.Willing

I like it, I’m a little confused that the glass shattered after the shot. what happened there?

Otherwise, very cool

:)

S.J.
- Posted 2009-01-12 02:31:33.
Sailor Emo

when I said that the glass shattered I was trying 2 say that I dropped the glass, only with the whole dramatics deal.I should’ve made it more clear but I didnt really think about it( thnx 4 pointing it out!)
- Posted 2009-01-12 02:31:33.
SJHundak/S.J.Willing

ah now i understand , Thanks!

S.J.
- Posted 2009-01-12 02:31:33.