You wrote:
“Either way they aren’t with you
Because you are behind their front of the door.”
The syntax here needs work. Better to fix the second line to something like “Because you stand outside their door or are locked behind your own.” Something like that.
Anyway, the imagery here is quite lovely otherwise. Well written.
LoA

Great job on this. I adore all of your poems. Well written as well.
LoA

KK, ana, i fixed it! :) haha