Cute little story of misinterpreting cues and events, though it winds up kind of quick and run together. Although, considering the character limit, nice job getting it to all fit.
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good first story! i agree with THX 0477 , cuz u only have so many characters to work with I think you did a good job. keep writing!
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i soo agree with thx 0477 & overlooked ….they pretty much said everything