It’s pretty good. I like the detail, but it’s a bit… uninteresting. Keep writing!

I like the premise. More detail would be nice, something to paint the picture, specifically, of the worlds she sees in these books. Also, your tense changes from past to present in the third paragraph. Might want to fix that. :-)
LoA

I thought it was a nice description of the joy of the Borders style book store slash coffee shop.