You did a great job conveying how pointless this woman feels her life to be, hitting on that point again and again. I loved how you brought up the dichotomy between the woman and her surroundings (kids, dog, etc) and the ‘can’t be a dog’ comment made me laugh.

The reason I gave this a three was because the woman didn’t do anything to change her situation. She just laid there.

With no action, I lost interest – unfortunately reinforcing her statement that her life is uninteresting. :(

I liked it at first, but the lady above is correct. I lost interest. But you could have been leaving it open for others to interpret, which can be a good thing.