I like the description of the “low-slung” pursuers. Very memorable

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i like it i like it. visual and action packed.

Whoa, the last line is really cool. I like it a lot. I also like how active it is.

“That’s life; it’s all about your motivation.”
All right, Mr. DeMille, I’m ready for my close-up. :D
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