This poem is great, I love the last two lines!! Great job!
i agree with Nissakit – the last two lines are very strong.i really like this! very original.=]
wow. dude. that was amazingly awesomee. i love it!
It’s unanimous. Last two lines were amazing. LoA
WOW mary fairy thats really good,, ttly micky-ish. ehh i hate that kid now, thinkin he cud get u backk!! stupid boy! lol this is reallyyyy goooddd especially the last 2 lines!! ily!
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