Oh, I just twigged that our hero is female. Slow on the uptake, me :-D

SO that makes the Mata Hari reference a bit earlier more sensible as well.

LoA

Ridcully, I know you&#8217;ll never come back and read this comment, but the series was based on the photo of the girl. Our protagonist is the girl in that photo.<br />Robotech, You kind of double-up on the word “slid” in this line: “The glove compartment slid open and a folder slid out.” I’d switch one of them with “fell” just to change it up a little. Probably say “the glove compartment fell open.”