Horrible twist on the story, but does give a possible explanation for the guy being such a pill about everything.
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This succeeded in making me smile. Yay for sillyness!
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Technically, it should be one fewer twit. “Less” is used for things you measure, like “you need less flour in those pancakes.” “Fewer” is used for things you can count, like “fewer people” or “fewer oranges.”

This has been your grammar lesson for the day. :)

I agree on the correctness of “one fewer twit” but as I was using vernacular speech in the ficlet, using “one less twit” seemed to fit better.

Its good!!

very funny in keeping with yoda’s ficlet, seemless. awesome dialogue. Robo must be an english prof. sheesh… sometimes too much emphasis on grammer ruins a story.
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Nicely done! ..& where did you find this one – buried in the archives – thanks for the sequel… I love it when my stuff gets sequeled. Quality work!

Good sequel!