Spaces between sentences are nice. Please don’t feel tied down by grammar. Feel free- you can communicate. It’s freedom. Likewise, capitalization at the beginnings of sentences are lovely as well. Finally, this could have been slightly better developed. You wrote it sort of like an essay. Maybe try it as a story? Or a poem? You know?
I still liked the message. I dislike stereotypes as well.
Storykeeper of Fae