Fun and exciting stuff, but you have him let her slide in first, but then he has the window seat. Little continuity blip there. And seems a bit odd that we don’t hear anything from the sister. Is she unconscious the whole time?
Oh no! And what do you mean by fun THX?? That’s not my idea of fun.
Omg!!Poor Mike I had no idea his sister was there!! Well no one really did but still
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