Wonderful job! As one who does believe, I think this was beautifully done.
LoA

Yeah, so stop saying that your writing is bad, this is a perfect example. Where did you get this idea??

Hmmm, I’m getting a feeling that you got this idea after watching August Rush, nevertheless I heart it…lol…and your writing isn’t bad, it’s awesomefabutastic!!!!

Very positive advice…..Dr. Phil, is that you?!