intelligent, poetic, original voice. never read anything quite like this. the phrasing.
Thx, Kermitgorf!
Oh! I missed this one. A challenge: This is a poem, so try formatting it as one. Its efficiency, it’s song-like rhythm, its pace, it scream poetry to me. See what you could do with this as blank verse, coaxing some more of your meaning out with line breaks. Great stuff.
Oh! I missed this one.
A challenge: This is a poem, so try formatting it as one. Its efficiency, it’s song-like rhythm, its pace, it scream poetry to me. See what you could do with this as blank verse, coaxing some more of your meaning out with line breaks.
Great stuff.
Sometimes “it be’s like that.” Loved the innuendo. Sublety is s*xy.
Sometimes “it be’s like that.”
Loved the innuendo.
Sublety is s*xy.
LOVE IT !
Very original voice, I agree with Kermit. Really enjoyed reading this! It’s Art!
Kermitgorf
Seth Miller
Will Hindmarch
gemminx
I LOVE FRANK IERO AND WILLIAM BECKETT!!!
Mistress Elsha Hawk