I think it is a good story.( Your just to stupid)- should be > You’re just too stupid. Not you the line.. you’re not stupid.. you’re smart.

I got it. Thank you!

I really think you’ve nailed it! The challenge, the conversation, I love it!
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I love this! It’s really good, very funny, and sometimes even true * runs away in shame *. lol, jk.

I meant true for me. Not you. Just to clarify.

Emotion’s are so hard to exspress when you are having a conversation with self.

Very well written. I love the conversation. Plus its about a guy. Hmm…
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lol all the comments left on this ficlet are soo funny.. lol you def. nailed the challenge. Once again blu, you’re an amazing writer!