I was about to write a story like this… stole my idea…=grumble=… but anyway, love it, sounds like me.

hehe. Brains vs bronze! Brains rock!
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I think you mean Brawn Blu. Gr8 story!
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“W” , I think you mean though instead of thought in the second paragraph, and then your story will be flawless! Well executed!
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Thanks, Mistress Elsha Hawk. Proof that I sometimes put too much “thought” into my stories. ;)
What I’d really like to know is why that’s the most common mistake I make when writing.

Well done, W.