Dude…

more trash from Kyle

Okay story.
Needs a little editing though. Mostly for punctuation. :]]
and trash??
harsh critisism.

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it’s not harsh you both write homophobic stories.

The sad thing is that this has gotten onto the Most Active list. How disappointing.
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It’s provocative, but I wouldn’t call it trash. It needs some editing and work, but it’s definitely a story.

The title is offensive

Also it has no relevance to THX ’s story, to which it’s linked.

I think I’m going to have to agree with Kevin on this one. While it’s not exactly Hemingway (subject matter aside, it’s more along the lines of something I would have written in elementary school), it does make a point. It takes a bully, turns the tables on them, and shows them the error of their ways.
My only two problems with it (other than formatting): no reason to link it to THX ’s story, and the last line is really pretty pointless.

I don’t have too many problems with the content – although it could certainly use some editing – but linking to a featured ficlet when it’s completely irrelevant, just to get readers, gets an automatic 1-star from me.

Yeah, I have to agree with Mycroft. However, a little editing and it could be better

Aside from spelling, grammer,one huge paragraph, the title, that it has nothing to do with the previous story and it makes no sense, yeah other than that it ’s a great story.
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Why’s this so popular?? It stinks. Not well written. Possibly the worse thing I ever read.

It’s so “popular” because clicks and comments and ratings count for popularity. It doesn’t matter if they’re bad ratings. Controversy is the best way to get a highly-rated story. (Just look at my “Best Practices” guides. :)

No offense but what the heck?

Uh, yeah. I’m going to have to agree with everyone here. Besides the fact that you need some serious editing, this uses offensive language and doesn’t have anything to do with “Reading With No Answers.”
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This is really offensive to lesbians, it’s offensive to anyone who’s gay. I hate when people make fun of them. Even though you’re not offending them. I do agree with everyone.

I did not just write that. I was totally contradicting myself. Wow. I meant to say even if you’re not making fun of them.

Insulting as fuck.
I am bisexual.
My mother is bisexual.
My uncle, who happens to be my favorite member of my family, is gay.
You stupid fuck.

Yeah, I was thinking about saying that bowiedarling, not the whole family part, but it was REALLY insulting. Even to me, and I’m straight.

Its pretty good. I agree with everyone else, it needs editing. But its a good idea. The title on the other hand… needs a little bit of work.

the story in general was bad. its ok to be homophobic but keep it to yourself

Well,you’ll have that won’t you?

I really don’t see what’s wrong here. I mean it’s not saying like oh we should burn the gays and BISEXUALS . Guess, what nothing really all that bad. You know what I mean I’m not saying that I believe in what I set as a sample, man, I really don’t. Catch my wave? :)

the story is not as offensive as the title.
see, many people who are bi,
or even gay would take this very offensively.
more so for the title.
if he changes the title it would be a bit humorous.
if you have read some of my stories you will see why i took alot of offence to this.
But i will adnit that the end of the story did make me laugh a bit.