I laughed out loud at the last line! Great finish.

Thanks! Feel free to continue it, or go back and write a parallel sequel to one of the earlier bits. There’s lots of room for this story to go all different directions. ;)

very miss leading at frist, until the end great job…

You’re a stinker, you know that, right? Sequel me! Sequel me! And the first comment is, “Not what I had in mind”? You cheeky monkey, you. Hope the sequel reconciles my previous failed attempt and your subsequent addition. :-P

Ooh – I have not read the prequel yet but this looks interesting…