Great start! Looking forward to reading more…

Yikes, great, thorough description of everything, really setting it up quite nicely. Killer ending…did not see that coming. Makes me think of ‘A Clockwork Orange’ maybe.
Loa

I’m hooked! Please continue, it was very intriguing.
LoA

Excellent ficlet! It is begging for a sequel! I love the ending.

Freaking awesome. The last line totally hooked me.