She is seeing things. Magical or a brain problem?
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The aneurysm would certainly point towards a brain problem. I could certainly feel her frustration over having to have people ‘hover over’ her.
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Strange that this is my first comment on one of your stories in a long time - but what jumped out at me was the variation in the length of your sentences. The switch from short to long and a paragraph being one sentence made the structure aesthetically (asthetically? I can’t spell) pleasing. The affects of her condition - seeing the skyline with her eyes was a well described invitation to her world.

darn cross out strikes again, oops.