Nice sequel, taking the thoughtful pondering of the other ficlet and sliding it into more of a story.LoA
Good job! That was a good transition from a thought-provoking ficlet, to a ficlet with a plot! LoA
Good job!
That was a good transition from a thought-provoking ficlet, to a ficlet with a plot!
LoA
ooooooo…good sequel.LoA
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