What a coniving money grubbing family.. he wants more than money that is plain to see, wonderful premise.

hey this reminds me of a twilight zone episode where the guy makes them wear ugly masks to get the inheretance then he dies and when they take em off they look like the masks but they kind of looked ugly before but you get the idea right loa awesome possum

Interesting beginning. This guy seems like someone who’s interesting in hunting the most dangerous game… humans. Bwahahaha (that was my evil laugh)
Should be “who loaned him the initial money.”

Thanx John fixed the his to him.

I definitely think this is an interesting beginning… off to read more.