Whoa! Chilling! Love the description of her eyes. It really brings all of the pain and a sense of loss together.

Dramatic entry!
LoA

That’s really emotional, and I love the focus on her eyes. They sound more like the mirror than the actual mirror.

omg….shivers down my spine. This could be a good story with a happy ending. Seguel pls.

wow. just…wow. I’ve read this like three times now…this has to be one of my favorite ficlets ever. tis awesome.
LoA

yeahh i agree..this was pretty amazing..off to read the sequel