Intriguing story, don’t understand why you miss the spaces after the commas and periods etc, makes the reading a bit difficult. S.J.
Intriguing story, don’t understand why you miss the spaces after the commas and periods etc, makes the reading a bit difficult.
S.J.
lol. sorry about that. I ran out of characters, so i improvised by taking out spaces. Everyone/thing must do their part for the greater good of storykind, including grammar/puncuation!! : )
Like I could ever honestly say “I don’t like this story.” and have ANYONE believe me. Seriously, this story sounds as though it is going to be quite funny. I like the way you are starting it and am eager to see where you go. :) (And I will forgive the intentional punctuation errors… this time..) JJ – improvisation makes for some very interesting adaptations.. :)
Like I could ever honestly say “I don’t like this story.” and have ANYONE believe me.
Seriously, this story sounds as though it is going to be quite funny. I like the way you are starting it and am eager to see where you go. :)
(And I will forgive the intentional punctuation errors… this time..)
JJ – improvisation makes for some very interesting adaptations.. :)
SJHundak/S.J.Willing
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Susan Holder is terrific