wow you wrote the story from the mirrors perspective.. very inovative. I like how you wrote this story. You captured the emotions of the woman beautifully. I like how the story takes shape by what reflects off the mirror. Great imagery.. Job well done.. this should be a shoe-in!

Very nicely done from a unique perspective and full of pain and sorrow. Masterful.
LoA

It was a bold move writing from a mirror’s POV , but you met the challenge!
A sorrowful entry!
LoA

I like the different way you wrote it from the mirror’s perspective, but you still managed to tell the story beautifully, and sadly.

I love that the mirror sees the physical, and the signs of the emotional pain. I think this is amazingly well-written.

LoA

I love the different perspective…and the way the mirror can see her pain. I think perhaps there’s a good reason I don’t have a mirror in my room =]
The mirror is watching you… dun dun dun
LoA
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