Ooh, kill her! Kill her! Sorry, just my first impulse since the restraints are off, or are they? But I suppose he’s drugged. I like the little bit of dialog. It’s funny stuff.
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Yeah, funny stuff like THX said. I read all these and I really like ‘em. The light trick – that’s a neat bit of information! I really like the last line too. I really want to know what happens. Sequel!!
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Great detail and momentum!

I like that while ‘you’ know most of the tricks, the drugs snuck up on ‘you’. Also, I’m enjoying this series because it uses the 2nd person singular tense so affectively (I’ve tried it and it never works for me).