Ouch, very painful scenario. I think you did a good job focusing on the situation and the feeling without belaboring the facts of the case, as it were. But you still let out enough that I could figure out the situation.
LoA

Ya, I agree w/ THX . You didn’t overload it, but you explained just enough. It’s sad how she is relating the color of the tree to the color of her blood on the tile, but it fits well with the picture and the story. I hope she’s alright.