i like it :). I dont really know what to change or add but if I think of some thig I’ll tell u.:)

I like it. It has a brooding quality. Good.

Nice, :) I don’t know if i’d say the undersea creature relax though, lol i’ve seen too many animal planet programmes. I like the sensations you’re describing though.

S.J.

out of all of the stories i have read of yours, this is one of my favorites. makes me want to go there. nice!