Wow.. all for a jumping? Must be a gangs life!LoA
Lots of little distracting typo-type things, making it seem rushed. Quick movement to a huge rumble.LoA
sorry, I was in a hurry to get it finished, i had other plans. I was running out of characters, so i had to improvise.
Finally got a sequel out. Let me know if I over-did it.
It’s starting to escalate. Are we talking a Jets vs. Sharks fight, Greasers vs. Socs, or Bloods vs. Crips?
it’s just your regular ol’ gang fight. nothing too organized. not as big as Bloods or Crips.
Now this is getting interesting.
Blusparrow
THX 0477
Never Explain
THX 0477
BARomero
Never Explain
PyroPunk 51 (PPP LoA)