i like it. can i write a sequel?

yah go ahead( any thing is free game)

That is cute. You should give it to your mom in a homemade card.

Aww that is so sweet. I wish I could say the same for my mom. Great job, once again.

that is really cute, and very sweet and simple. I love it. thanks for your comment on my mothers day poem, and yes i did give it to her. keep writing!!