aaaawwwwwww. i like this. its so sad, and so emotional. u wrote it with feeling, i can tell. great job. make a sequel or something!

This is very sad, but it’s interesting that you made the woman the agressor. It has good descriptions though too.

=( *sniffle,cry very sad.

that is sooooooooo sad but sooooo well written!!

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