Great moral to the story and twist on the saying. Nicely done in a neat, compact little ficlet with just enough detail and setting to get your point across.
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LOL ! I love it, Awesome!
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Great double meaning! Love it! The story was a bit short, but the punch line was great!
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I like how you twisted the saying to fit the story. This was really cool!

I like the ending. For some reason Donny said that with an Irish Accent.. I have no idea where that came from. Cool story.. I was a lil unclear on the relationship between Donny and Sharon.. But hey the story was great!

i like the accent idea! I can totally imagine that- “for god’s sake, don’ squeeze it in yer eye!”