Really nicely written. Normally I want sequels, but I think this calls for a prequel.
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Nice job giving some attention that moment usually after the fade-out in a thriller or adventure movie.
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I agree, it’s interesting that you gave attention to that fade to black moment. Very cool.

I agree with THX , and I love that he looks at the body thinking it may come alive again. I would do that too!