That last paragraph got really confusing with both speaking in the same paragraph, plus internal thoughts, plus maybe a typo or two? Other than that, I like her indecision and the whole ugh, it’s morning feel to it all.
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Thanks THX , I’ll look it over!
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Corrections made! I wrote it alittle fast.. oppsie.
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derrick? who’s he? i think you ment Drew…
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LOL ! another correction! My bad!
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Never read your friends sequel with one of the characters Macy then write a sequel on different one.

Ooooh, this is good. I hope Macy doesn’t end up getting hurt!

haha i know what you mean blu.

I like it, poor drew though.
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this is really good. i feel bad 4 drew tho. :[
SEQUEL !!!!!!