hmmm….wow. it was not was i expected, but thats really a good thing!!! It kept me reading.

aww!!! i just want to hug you, hug your character. this is so touching, so greatly written! aww!

Very touching and even a little bittersweet. You were able to convey a lot of emotion in such a short space. Very nice job!
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Bittersweet is a good description! It’s a nice life-lesson too.

I like bittersweet. It fits. I like how much feeling there is for such a small story.

So many understated but strong emotions with so few words. Beautiful… just beautiful.