Haha, I liked the way the salesman is trying to “sell a dream”. How much does a dream cost?

What an interesting ficlet! I laughed at the part about McDonalds because it is very true. Awsome job : )

This would be a cool ficlet even without the mystery of Hodge, which pushes the whole thing into even more sinister territory.

You know, you snookered me. I thought I had this one pegged and you threw me for a loop.

Sheisters are all the same, aren’t they? Insulated by willful ignorance and righteousness of purpose. At least that’s what I got.

Process point: you get the fact that Ficlets take place “in media res” and I need to do that more often/embrace that. Thanks for The Flying Lie.

Odd little tale about truth in advertising. A few missed quotation marks, but a fun little story with twists as Seth pointed out.

Thanks for the heads-up, THX . I corrected the one missed quotation mark I could find.

I liked the part about Mcdonalds too. Very true, and very funny. This was a very enjoyable ficlet.

Hahaahaha! McDonalds. LOL
Reminds me of this quote.
“Hi, I’m Kevin Jonas and I’d like to sell you a car!”
LOL
Sorry OJD .
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Clowns don’t love us? Quirky good read.. and another down side to flying cars.. mid air crashes and falling parts and bodies and into buildings.. sure glad they dont exist unles its controlled like in Star Wars fashion. Congrats on Featured Ficlet.
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haha that was funny..mcDonalds…so true.

And congrats on the featured Ficlet

I like it :) The mcdonalds is true, I quit it a couple years ago, haha. It was interesting and I like how it started and ended.

I really enjoyed this. I think you captured the salesman perfectly: you only describe him by a few actions he takes and his smile, but I swear I could almost see this guy. Killer ending line, too.

Ha! I love the last line. I enjoyed this. Great dialogue, and good characterization in a small amount of space. Well done. Congrats on the featured ficlet.

I don’t want no clown loving me! That thing has always scared the living daylights out of me… Great dialogue, way to sum up the average salesman in such a small amount of words. Nice work.